Friday, 2 November 2018

Wellington Zoo

Wellington Writing



We learnt about writing an imaginary story based on the Wellington locations that we will be going on camp.

I found it easy to increase my creativity in my Wellington writing.
I found hard to figure out how it needs to make more sense.
I really enjoyed finding out what animals are there in Wellington Zoo.
Next time I need to make sure that my writing makes more sense for the reader to understand.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Ruby, I'm Piper from Pompallier Catholic School, I admire your writing it has so much vocabulary! That sounds exciting that you'll be going to Wellington. 😁

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